Project 1 Feedback
Work in groups of three, according to the list below. Read the blogs and write responses to the other members of your group. Respond to at least two other projects (each person should get at least two responses). Then get together and take turns looking at each group members' project, talking through your response. Try to arrive at a clear "to do" list for each person.
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Questions to guide your blog response
- What is the relation between word and image in this project? What would you say is the "idea" or "point" of the project? How is this multimedia writing that works with both message and medium? How is notation used? How does the reader participate in the text? What is the constellation/arrangement? Is there use of sampling/remixing? Answer at least one of these questions at length and be specific in reference to the project.
- What is your response to the project? Do you like it or not? How does it make your feel? What associations does it make for you, i.e. what references to other images, writings, songs, etc.? What would make it clearer or make your response stronger? Answer at least one of these at length and be specific in reference to the project.
- What does the project do well technically, in terms of using the computer, word/image, design, etc.? What doesn't work as well technically? What advice can you give to the author? You might offer general advice on how they approach the look/feel of the project, or specific advice on using software etc. Answer at least one of these at length and be specific in reference to the project.
- Any other responses? What should they work on first?
Groups:
Ashley Brown, Zachary Johnson, Stephen Myers, Megan Vassar
Erin Clemens, Genevieve Landers, Louie Olive, Daniel Mitchem
Jennifer Dempsey, Terri Lutgring, Valerie Phillips, Dave Ryan
Erin Humphreys, Nathan Maruso, Bethany Ploger, Anthony Jimmie
Gwendolyn Schoolcraft, Karen Scott, John Thrasher, Vanessa White