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From sbaldwin Fri Apr 28 16:50:23 -0400 2006
From: sbaldwin
Date: Fri, 28 Apr 2006 16:50:23 -0400
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This looks pretty good. I would say it's in the high B range in terms of grading at this point. Some thoughts:
- The text is pretty good. Consider tell stories - as they happened - to go with the rich details you already are presenting. For example, the pictures and posters on the countertop... what's the story there? where do they come from?
- The Alpha Omicron Pi page is quite long. Consider breaking it up and/or formatting it in ways that make it more readable. You could make the pictures smaller or use headings, etc.
- Add the pictures needed under "frequent visitors."
- Use only one Quicktime movie per page, otherwise it takes too long ot load (e.g. the Large House page)
- Try to include links on every page. You still have some "dead ends" (My Walls page, for example)
- I like the use of formatting (the colored text on My Walls, for example). Try to use this in other places.